Some people say that parents should control their children’s from a very young age. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint.
It is true that children should be well – managed by their parents. I completely agree with the idea that families have to control their kids’ behavior from when they are still a little baby. The following essay will present my view of the issue.
The first my point, a child is always willing to explore the world around them by imitating and senses. Kids not only mimic behaviors caused by their parents but also emulate the attitudes of adults in families. Parents have mirrored their kids. Families as a small society, including parents’ habits, behaviors, thinking, characteristics, which influenced children. Thus, parents are necessary to direct their kids to know what is wrong and right.
The second point I would mention is that at school age, children would need to parents’ managing about studying and relationships. The reason for that is children getting away from parents, which leads to indifferent to the exercises and has a tendency into unhealthy friendship. Families focus attention on their child as a way to give love, care for them. Children who have grown up in these peaceful environments tend to become much confident and sociable. Thus, a key benefit of issues is that create a correctly developmental path to children.
People who can or cannot do things helpful and beneficial to society depend on a large part of their families. Hence, I fully support the view that parents who are legally responsible for their children can give a hand to bring a bright future to kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rrectly developmental path to children. People who can or cannot do things helpf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, still, thus, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76837335187 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0187445101 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259458168407 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784466342091 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051565009161 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152371386526 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353177807979 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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