Nowadays in many countries women have full time job. Therefore, it is logical to share household task evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays the number of women working full-time is increasing as the real part of life. It is widely believed that housework should be shared between males and females equally. I strongly agree with the idea.
One of the reasons for sharing household tasks promotes gender equality. At stereotype existing a long time is that women should take care of domestic works. And the men would be a breadwinner to support the family financially and materially. However, this practice also becomes less common. The women have an equal right to men’s. They also are a vital major workforce contributing to the society both materially and spiritually. Even some women contribute a great part to their role in Non-governmental organizations. They fully take part in activities. I absolutely see no reason why women have to take responsibility for the household that has labor-intensive. In order not to lavish female intellectual sources because some women keep them out of advanced labor trends, it makes sense means that a husband gives a hand to domestic tasks.
However, there are some drawbacks to this tendency. Many men are inherently less experienced in housework, which is regarded as custom in some countries and injured males’ dignity. Both twice things can lead to a quarrel unnecessary prevent family ties. Luckily for the support of labor-saving tools, a husband completely could learn the way to share housework.
All in all, although some conflict might be strict when sharing equally but significant benefits. I completely believed women have the right to enjoy loving by sharing home tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26744186047 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487879618 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0590980601 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5263157895 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264331542246 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725989087717 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544465696955 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147295821238 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593358399213 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.