Some people think that the media should be for entertainment only. While other people believed that media should have education value.Discuss both view and give your own view.
opinions are devided on media should serve entertainment or education value. In my opinion, media can and should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, media has a prominent role in entertainment. Firstly, media is the communication outlets or tools used to store and deliver information or data such as TV, radio,etc. people think that media is a valuable and practical tool which has confidence in everyone. The reason why media becomes popular is its easily and rapidly updating news and information. In addition, more and more people are interested in game shows and reality shows because of its first-rate quality and high entertainment.
On the other hand, some people think that educational aspect should be appreciated.It is true that media can affect directly to users, especially children and teenager. So nowadays there are a number of programs which has violent acts or discourteous speech. Moreover, those programs put on the air sexual scenes which are inappropriate to that ages. As a result, government should consider carefully to issue educational programs and positive value.
In conclusion, even though people have different opinions between entertainment and educational, personally I am in agreement with the opinion that media plays a principal role in both entertainment and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46376811594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14966213065 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2400547138 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353251730787 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126586814063 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101842163608 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213880608389 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723157910427 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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