Some people believe that social networking sites have bring people together,but have adverse effect on communities and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is an irrefutable fact that the uses of social networking sites have increased dramatically over the last few years. It has profoundly effected people as well as communities. Some people believe it has brought individuals together from across the globe but have dreadful impact on societies. I totally agree with this argument. In my opinion, the impact that social networking sites have on lives of the in individuals, it does not have same impact on communities.
To begin with, the social networking sites such as Facebook,twitter has played a commendable role in bringing people together from all over the world, before the development of technology people rarely had a juncture to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle. Furthermore, these social networking sites have social groups which give people a way to have a commune with people having common interests.
On the flip side, the impact that social networking sites have had on societies can clearly be seen as negative. Rather than a people spending time with people within their community, they are more interested in people online. Consequently, people within the societies are no longer forming strong and supportive relationships. Furthermore, societies as a whole becoming disjointed and fragmented as individuals are spending time online with people who they have never met and who they are unlikely to meet in near future.
In conclusion, although social networking sites have proved its significance in bringing all the people together from many countries, it has adverse effects on people within communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , twitter
...social networking sites such as Facebook,twitter has played a commendable role in bringi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43307086614 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97993787856 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1081523172 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421072157802 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170371281905 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892171724082 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292626265133 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543451081681 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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