Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. To what extent do you agree?
Medical, paramedical and mentors are vital for the society and their involvement is more countless in community. A significant number of people believe that they should be rewarded with high income as compare with entertainment and sports famous individuals. In my opinion, I completely agree because their participation is much needed in the society for the safety of mankind.
These professions are making life of other individuals by treating them with right medicines, therefore they should be paid enough to secure a good career. Society has always thanked to the doctors and science, which help the patients to recover in number of times. The jobs of doctor cannot be performed by anyone else without taking courses and trainings, thus the government should pay them enough so that their mind should not divert from their profession. For instance, various life saving drugs are discovered by doctors to protect the people from deadly diseases such as tuberculosis.
Another factor is to encourage youngsters to take part in such professions, so that they can feel secure while taking such subjects in their studies. Medical studies are considered difficult and time taking subjects, therefore only a few individuals prefer to select medical subjects in their professional career. Thus, providing support in terms of wealth can feel them safeguard in this profession. For instance, in some country’s medical professionals are paid according to the standards and same amount irrespective of their work location and the guidelines are mandatory to follow for the hospital’s authority.
In conclusion, the contribution of medical professionals is essential and more valuable and cannot be neglected by the society, thus they should be paid high income for financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44604316547 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9985590798 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2760441472 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147096860365 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549813883424 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528568383961 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107740401121 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603318104972 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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