Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed. While others believe action can be taken to bring about change. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is irrefutable that human attitude and activities towards our planet earth have made the situation worse for other forms of life as well as for humans also. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that we cannot reverse it by doing any action. However, others think some steps can help the world to be at better place than today. Before putting any opinion, it is important to investigate both aspects.
On the one side, the rising population of humans and demands to fulfill the need of these are abolishing habitat for other creatures of this world. Industrialization is one of the contributors to destroying forests through replacing habitat with factories. Which impacts the species present their and may get extinct from that place. Concept of building infrastructure is ever rising demand for the growing population and to complete the requirements we are removing plants and other vegetation from the grassland and still finds insufficient. Hence, I believe that in future this earth will not enough to accommodate the ever-rising population of this world.
On the other side, although humans have made the situation difficult for other animals to live on the planet, but the scientific approach can lead us to have a better future for all the living organisms. Our scientist with the support of technology and science has made tremendous efforts to bring back the healthier situation in this world for the possibility of survival of all creatures. For instance, plastic contamination in the sea is killing millions of lives every year around the world, and to overcome such issues, an environmentalist has developed biodegradable plastic as a replacement with the traditional bags
In conclusion, although scientists are working hard to control the damaging situation by humans. However, I personally believe that the time is over and it is impossible to improve these conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...her forms of life as well as for humans also. It has argued by a significant number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20779220779 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0024516322 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3383202098 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21433271208 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703051172963 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049356699534 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111616283997 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655523197856 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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