At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Nowadays, the growth of population is increase dramatically in every day, especially the large value of young adult which is huge then the older people, where this case give some impacts in public, it is due to some reasons.
On the negative side, the rising of young adult influence some development in the world, such as technology, education, business even crimes. This issues have relation with the think matters todays where the young adult groups as the main role in every accidents. For instance, as we know that Indonesia is one of the biggest population of people among countries in the world that is balance with the highest number of criminal case and near every events knew that the major actor is the young adult. As result, cause of this growth, feeling uncomfortable live in a country which have negative background will exist to disturb communities. In conclusion, this happen the extent to some damages in society because of young adults with their character that are tend to do anything uncontrollable and without handle of the older people.
On the positive side, as I said in the second paragraph that, the main role of development era is young adult generation with their fresh mindset about modern todays then tend curiously to find out new experiments. Situation like this gives some advantages such as. First, as continuer of the older, they have pressures to do better than before, the happen are some changes suitable hopefully of old generation. Second, the growth of newcomers will help to becoming developed countries where the existence modern progress that is dramatically gone up by young adult then extends benefits as country. Finally, the huge of it will give limit to the classify age for work as of the older have some occasion to holiday in younger age.
To sum up, the growing of population gives both effects between advantage and disadvantage, in each sides can influence change in public therefore it is depend on the government how to handle this situation. In my opinion of view, the damages more than the benefits since the huge young adult cause more potency of negative impacts.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
... of population is increase dramatically in every day, especially the large value of young ad...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... crimes. This issues have relation with the think matters todays where the young adult gr...
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Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ng adults with their character that are tend to do anything uncontrollable and witho...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have pressures to do better than before, the happen are some changes suitable hop...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ve pressures to do better than before, the happen are some changes suitable hopefully of ...
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Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ally, the huge of it will give limit to the classify age for work as of the older have some ...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...luence change in public therefore it is depend on the government how to handle this si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95251396648 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60599555277 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8384143999 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.384615385 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2188380732 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759139753121 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504911744805 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134675462196 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678126300287 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.