In many countries, the amount of crimes increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
In this modern era, there is a gradual increase in crime rate in majority of the countries in the world. There are myriad of cause’s effect on this current trend and the society can take preventive measures in reducing the crime rate. In this essay, I shall discuss on the main causes of crime and the ways to deal with this situation as well.
First and foremost, the scarcity of resources and unfair distribution of facilities are considered to be the main reasons for the increase of crime rate. For instance, the highest number of crimes are evident in developing countries, specially located in African and Asian region. Apart from that, media can stimulate people’s mind towards crimes by the way of telecasting violant programmes. Moreover, there is a correlation between crime rates with the rate of drug addiction as those who are under the influence of drugs tend to involve in crimes more oftenly than an ordinary person too. Therefore, the society need to work towards to mitigate the crime rate of the society by implementing following procedures with the help of its stakeholders.
Government has to ensure fair distribution of resources to minimize criminals in the society while ensuring a quality life for all the citizens. Governments, even can educate the society in conflict minimization strategies from primary education, meanwhile the curriculum ought to be updated and enriched to inculcate good qualities in the minds of the younger generation. However, religious education has to be compulsory for all communities, since children need to take the responsibilities in the coming future. Furthermore, the law enforcing institutions such as police and army has to equiped with sophisticated equipment and technology to facilitate criminal investigation. Finally, media institutions have to operate under a common guideline to eliminate spreading violent thought in the society.
In conclusion, governments, individuals, media institutions, law enforcing institutions and education institutions must be integrated to eradicate crimes in a particular society while improving its confidential, and quality attributes. Finally, human being has not been able to find a sustainable solution for this hazard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48843930636 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18484651939 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9880406253 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208079216342 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700783593648 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066458826535 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123734018757 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962101399186 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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