More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
<p class="MsoNormal">Today’s diet consumption is affecting humans in terms of
health and this number is increasing day by day and also, the solution is not
coming from these scientific pills. It is believed by some individuals that traditional
medicines should be allowed to cure patients. I completely disagree because old-style
medicines are not manufactured with proper care and their action of curing is
slow as compared with modern tablets.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Herbal medicines needs time to cure the patient from
diseases. The pace of killing infections is quite slow as linked with modern
medicines and sometimes it cost the life of an individual. Which makes the
situation worsen, thus consuming such medicine is not full proof of improving
health in a timely manner. For instance, homeopathy medicines require 1 week to
control the nasal infections such as common cold as compare with modern
medicines which require only one day. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Traditional medicines are not prepared in scientific manner
besides bringing them back for the treatment purpose can create more problems. These
medicines are not manufactured under proper hygiene practices, thus they
possess risk of infections, and therefore the authority should not encourage
traditional medicines in the market. Only few authority permit the use of such
medicines around the globe.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, although advanced treatments fail sometimes
in recovering patients, but the impact of consuming old-date medicine by
patients on getting better is even slow and poorer. In addition to that, these
medicines are not prepared according to the science law. Hence, I believe that
we should not encourage people to consume traditional medicines.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 8, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is not full proof of improving health in a timely manner. For instance, homeopathy medicines req...
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Line 25, column 76, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'fail'.
Suggestion: sometimes fail
...onclusion, although advanced treatments fail sometimes in recovering patients, but the impact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22348484848 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.03885129597 2.80592935109 180% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8414155568 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.363636364 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211755996466 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904620545917 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502238684196 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597280745463 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442993246086 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.09 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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