More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
Numerous individuals suffered from health issues due to this advance life style, which cannot be treated with modern prescriptions. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that traditional medicines should be reintroduced and promoted. Although, outdated tablets can cure infections rapidly and are without any drawbacks, I am of the opinion, that modern medicines are precise and accurate in treating individuals from infections.
Science and technology are immersed and faithful in treating infections for decades and their accuracy in treating deadly infections like HIV, cancer and Malaria is commendable. However, slight variation in the habitat makes infections resistant to these medicines to some extent, but working on that also can repair such problems. For instance, multidrug resistance by some bacteria can prevent the person from curing for some time, but providing the dose with other combinations can eliminate such problems. Hence, I believe that we should have trust on advanced therapy to cure people from various diseases.
On the other side, homemade remedies are quite common in the ancient times and their fast action to act against diseases has made them popular around the world. More importantly these products are naturally made, thus carry little side effects to the body of consumer and that gives them advantage over modern medicines and people believe that those traditional medicines should be brought back in to market. For instance, use of cardamom in treating wounds is very common and useful as cardamom possesses antibacterial property.
In conclusion, while natural medicines can cure patients rapidly and with almost no draw backs. The advance medicines are verified by various experiments by scientists before giving to the patient, thus we should have faith in advanced treatments. Before taking any medicine we must consult to doctor to avoid risks associated with pills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n treating individuals from infections. Science and technology are immersed and ...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould have faith in advanced treatments. Before taking any medicine we must consult to ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50505050505 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75858485173 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2683931543 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278399570038 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926494888846 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878928503798 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156841550133 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874301889605 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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