There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.
Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
Describe the complaints that have been made
Say why the reception area is important
Suggest how the reception area could be improved
.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to suggest you few improvements for our company reception area by considering all the major complaints which we have received last few months. Receiving negative feed backs is not good for our company reputation I am coming up with few solutions. Let me explain in more details.
As you already know that our receptions area is not having an ample space for more than four people, we have received lot of negative comments from our visitors. In addition to that customers have complained about the messy atmosphere around the reception area also.
Since reception is the place where customers can get an overall idea regarding our restaurant, It is very much important to renovate our reception area with clean and tidy way. Not only that it is needed to expand the reception area too
Therefore it would be better if you can give a quick response, in order to start the renovating process very soon.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely.
Rekha Stephan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sy atmosphere around the reception area also. Since reception is the place where cu...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ded to expand the reception area too Therefore it would be better if you can give a qu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ing process very soon. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely. Rekha...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Yours sincerely. Rekha Stephan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90173410405 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56467676489 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9059788061 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251409900146 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094572885753 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795761906429 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100189975631 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545953020918 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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