Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
History are vital in shaping the world the live in. Some people say that exploring the past is not important to the people in this modern world. this author strongly disagrees to the statement and will give her own perspective.
To begin with, there are people who suggest that studying the events and information centuries ago is not vital to the people nowadays. Firstly, people may think that it is more important to focus and gain knowledge in resolving current issues in climate change, poverty, food scarcity and crime that extremely affect the human lives. moreover, learning about history is a waste of time as this will not change the situation of the present world. Focusing in the developments and future innovations in science and technology will pose greater benefits to the society by providing comforts and convenience to day to day living.
Notwithstanding, this author argues that having knowledge about the past is of utmost importance. it is true that we are facing problems threatening the existence of human race; however, learning from historical events will give us knowledge on the changes that took place centuries ago and may propose answers to the pressing issues nowadays. Moreover, the recent advancements in modern technology and other fields of sciences will not be possible without the discoveries of the people from the past. For instance, cellular phones arise from the birth of the first telephone invented by Alexander Graham Bell. Therefore, the way we are living today and the improvements we experience, comes to life because of the past knowledge and events.
To recapitulate, despite the modernization people of the today’s world, learning about history should not be neglected as it is as valuable as learning the present and the future. I do believe that looking back in past will help us in moving forward to a greater future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12012987013 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78153161304 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529220779221 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6404860155 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175086471324 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594677155612 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358200838055 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105326294051 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515986186367 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.