A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?
It is the duty of the law enforcement agency to ensure the safety of its individuals. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that the state should utilize more funds on protection system of nation from enemies and less on social benefits such as cinema halls. Although, defense is necessary for any nation to have strong boundaries against enemy countries. I am of the opinion that community benefits are also vital to have healthy environment in the nation.
Entertainment is vital in today’s life style for the people to release work stress and family tensions. Fun and social activities with friends or family allow person to relax and boost the momentum of individual to feel alive and happy while struggling with hurdles in life. Therefore, the Indian government promotes the Bollywood industry by spending billion dollars projects around the world to encourage and let Indians and others to enjoy the taste of Indian cinema even in foreign lands. It has proven from studies that cinema impacts on the mind of persons psychologically and help them to feel happy and alive while watching theatre.
On the other side, defense system are required to control the public from inside the nation as well as to act against enemy countries whenever required. The arms and power of police enforce the public to follow discipline, law and order to maintain peace. For instance, protection of country people from enemy countries in war like situations are supported by using advanced equipment and tools of ammunition. Consequently it is vital for the nation to have updated weapons by spending more money in it.
In conclusion, while defense system is essential in terms of safety of individuals in inside and outside the country. The social activities like entertainment are also equally vital to have healthier environment in the society. Hence I believe that we should circulate funds according to the needs of the nation.
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1065830721 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74432030094 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1994331025 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997224143962 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307421399454 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339294275576 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553359946705 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154722770941 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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