Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for a child having a large number of toys?
Nowadays, numerous of toys are purchased for babies to play with by their parents. However, having a large of toys brings not only upsides but also downsides. The objection of this essay is to discuss benefits and drawbacks of this.
On one hand, owning plenty of toys is advantageous in some certain aspects. First of all, toys play an important role in relaxing. In stead of spending time on watching television which is easy to make the children’s eyes and brain worse , the babies can play with toys which is harmless for their eyes and brain. Moreover, if they are an only child, toys can make them get away negative feelings, especially loneliness. Second, toys are one of the best ways to help parents so as to educate their babies. They can learn alphabet, some basic operations by playing educational toys. Moreover, it also develop the children’s thinking, creativity and imagination.
On the other hand, toys also impact negatively to the children. The biggest problem is that children become introverts and get bad teamwork skills. In the past, the children played outdoor games with their friends which helped them develop teamwork skills and was easy to make relationships. However, they just play with their toys and do not care much about outdoor nows. That a reason why there are many autistic children nowadays. Secondly, loads of toys which are made from dangerous materials are still available. In the markets, tons of harmful toys,which can impact detrimentally on the children health, are sold with optional prices, and the parents cannot realise them so they bought for their children.
In conclusion, toys bring merits but they also give considerable impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as to, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10071942446 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7106349411 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571942446043 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.043383594 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355792257553 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10892138449 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613545905563 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204518899184 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773443695428 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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