Some people think parents should supervise their children's activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom .discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it goes without saying that every parents have their own way of raising children.Therefore,from the perspective of some parents,there should be some restrictions on some activities of their offspring,whilst,others believe that they should give complete freedom to them.In this essay,i would intend to enunciate both aforementioned views in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, some people limit their children's freedom for some obvious reasons that's why they restrict them to do some activities.The first and foremost point is that children are innocent,so they may unable to differentiate between right and wrong.Moreover,they prefer to do that in which they show their interest without guessing its result.While parents have experience of life, they can guide their children by supervising their daily activities.
On the other hand,many parents advocate that their children have full freedom.There are some viable reasons behind this view.Firstly,since the mind of children is very creative during the early years of their life. Furthermore, they are capable to construct new ideas with the help of their creative mind. Thus, to create restriction of some activities of children by the parents can become obstacles in the holistic development of them.Consequently, it is a very silly idea to limit their freedom.Newton is the well known example to insist that parents ought to give full independence to do their desire activities.
By the way of conclusion,it is my opinion that unbridle parenting can be deterimental to the children because it is crucial for the development of early years of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56451612903 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62227866205 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.44409155 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.0 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.8333333333 7.06120827912 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379624055024 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189066567929 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962738199048 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232970572605 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755701595962 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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