Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see
the world. The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
These days, International Integration is becoming a trend in the world. it is true that learning a new language provides people with various types of new traditions and cultures. As far as I'm concerned, teaching a foreign language at all primary schools is definitely essential and should be mandated if the program of teaching english is powerful and effective.
There is no doubt that children are naturally quick learners. children's' mind can be moulded easily. So most of the students will be successful in learning a new language when they are taught the right method. but the school has done the opposite. J.A.Lawson reports that the dropout rate in foreign language programs in schools is as high as 95%. learning new foreign languages would be a stirring activity for elementary students if teachers encourage students to speak and give out more listening lessons instead of boring grammar and vocabulary in the class.
On the other hand, teaching a foreign language should be compulsory at primary schools only. because learning at a mature age is difficult and ineffective. Usually, they have to face numerous obstacles such as a huge amount of workload, subjects become harder, etc. Their learning will be interrupted but learning english requires continuity. For instance, I am working as a high school student. Being a high school student makes me exhausted because of the amount of knowledge, homework, subjects, exams, etc. it is definitely impossible for me to improve my english during school-year and summer, when I am totally freed from school, is the best time for learning english.
In conclusion, learning foreign languages become an critical activity nowadays. I agree with the statement if schools renew their language programs and I highly recommend that students should start learning a new language at an early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20469798658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8178909554 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7057491473 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278761075829 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924195259108 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932635936663 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200425024087 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530590025343 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.