Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh than disadvantages.
Nowadays it is believed that the preferable for small to begin studying a strange languages in their time at elementary school before high school. There are both advantages and disadvantages for child to choose learn another languages. In this essay, I completely agree that it gives more benefits rather than disadvantages for some causes.
In the one hand, the main agreement of that issue is to increase our relation with bigger amount of people. It is because various languages were the key of our success while take us to happy life. For example, in Indonesia, many people decided to work or study aboard than just inside because workplace or enjoyment of life overseas more exciting and pleasant. As the result, our probability to regret that judgement to learn foreign languages would be come down. However, it is important to revisit that resolution to get unbelievable ourselves lifestyle.
On the other hand, the disbenefit of the resolve is loss of our regional customs, because we already like and enjoy the another culture and unrealize our identity. For example, in this decade a part of society do not care about their citizenship and do anything which the assume is true and not pay attention to their attitude. Therefore, most the guardians u allowed their cubs to read up the other languages. Furthermore, there is no doubt for parents to not send their child to go to languages class.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that learning different languages when at primary school is more important than it will take at secondary school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
...e for small to begin studying a strange languages in their time at elementary school befo...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to learn'
Suggestion: to learn
...s and disadvantages for child to choose learn another languages. In this essay, I com...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...their citizenship and do anything which the assume is true and not pay attention to their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00383141762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72250194717 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6605516778 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32226357845 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936576943673 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098904036461 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206462930139 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128266730505 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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