When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects (TPO 33)
Working in a group can be beneficial for students. While most people believe that students will have high efficiency when they work alone, I tend to argue that working in a group can lead to much more effective learning that working on your own. In the following essay, I will vindicate my stance through two noticeable reasons.
To begin with, students who work in a group can feel less tired when they do their projects with other students. In this regard, they can have more concentrations on the part of the project they should deal with. What I experienced is a compelling example to clarify this. When I was in college, I have two types of projects: a biology project and a history project, but my biology project had to be done with one of my friends while my history project had to be done by myself. As my friend and I had shared the biology project between ourselves, we had enough time gathering information and related data. For my history project, however, I got mentally tired when I realized the huge amount of workload I had to cope with. As a result of this, I could not gather as much information as I could for my history project, making me get a bad grade.
Another equally significant point is that by participating in a group, students can share their ideas among themselves. In this way, they can boost their creativity. For instance, in a research study conducted last year, a group of students was asked to work together for their school project while the other group was asked to work by themselves. The results got researchers by surprise. They realize that the brain of students working in a group was more developed than that of the other group. They concluded that the more people a person relates, the more diverse ideas they hear, making them more creative when facing different circumstances.
All in all, working in a group is of more advantages to students. This is because not only can they have more concentration on their project but they can also acquire lateral thinking through discussion and exchange of ideas. This is why I recommend teachers encourage their students to work on their projects together.
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- TPO 24 73
- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors- TPO 29 73
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 70
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 70
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73936170213 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65209586824 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465425531915 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2081704779 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7894736842 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370400051621 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116460544253 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893800736442 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24473728798 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144472874018 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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