Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Dev,
I am writing to thank you for amazing photographs from our last trip to Canada which you sent me yesterday. Most importantly, I would like to thank you and your family for helping me out during entire trip and for my stay at your place. It was astonishing and memorable experience with you all.
I was thinking to write this letter on the same day when I arrived in my city, but due to unavoidable circumstances it didn’t happen. Because my mother was not doing well and she had high fever, unfortunately, I had to visit my parents on the same day. But, thanks to god that she is feeling better and recovering very well now.
I would like to invite you to visit my place this summer as I told you earlier as well. During this visit, you will stay at my home with me and crash on my sofa. In my city, there are many places and old monuments, in which you would be interested. Moreover, you will get a chance to explore sceneries and panoramic places where you can capture good photos with your camera.
I am waiting for response and confirmation on it, please respond as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements in advance.
Thank you,
Ankur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...place this summer as I told you earlier as well. During this visit, you will stay ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47004608295 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56033814051 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3186880026 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331817633583 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130632251336 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803377109704 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171436218284 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113238912201 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.