Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
In this rapidly growing world, achieving their goal is everyone's destiny even dream also. But some of the people only reached their desire not all the people. Because it is depends upon how the hard work is done for it. But some people have an opinion, it’s all happened only because of native region. I will discuss my both opinions in the following paragraphs.
Region is the important thing for a person’s victory because regions will create an environment to achieve their goal and it have great influence on that. For instance, by born Steve jobs is an American. After invention of the Apple Phone by Steve jobs, he became more popular first in an America then all over the world. Because of the native region they encourage him by buying the apple phones.so the reason for his popularity is also by the region.
On the other hand, getting accomplished is depending on the person's brain, hard work and attitude towards the goal. Because victory is the byproduct of hard work so it doesn’t depends on the backgrounds like country, language, and region. For example, Dr.APJ.Abdul kalam was a great scientist and erstwhile president of India who is from one of the rural places in Tamilnadu and he is the role model for every youngsters in India till now. How he attain this stage is only because of his knowledge and hard work.
In conclusion according to my analysis from both sides, my opinion is falls in to the line that is region is not the deciding factor for the success. Alacrity and involvement plays an important role behind all the successful persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ir goal is everyones destiny even dream also. But some of the people only reached th...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... everyones destiny even dream also. But some of the people only reached their desire not al...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...nvironment to achieve their goal and it have great influence on that. For instance, ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...On the other hand, getting accomplished is depending on the persons brain, hard work and att...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Abdul
...nguage, and region. For example, Dr.APJ.Abdul kalam was a great scientist and erstwhi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834290929 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6960429777 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22010970857 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737342395753 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841454619042 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137458704093 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528204976021 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.