Car ownership
In the modern era, Car industry become billion dollars industry. Since, First car invented, On daily basics cars increased on streets. Increment of cars on streets led to huge problem of traffic jam. Most of cities of the world suffer from massive traffic jams. It is also true that many cities of the world become "one big traffic jam". This eassy deal with reasons of traffic jam and how govenment handle this problem.
Now days life become so quick, Everyone want easy and reliable mode of transportation that is car and it is also desire of people to buy a car because car become symbol of status. This desire of people cause the big traffic jams in the cities. As an illustration, In 2017, Bejing witnessed the biggest traffic jam of the decade, that slow down the entire city for 12 days. Apart from individual's desires, Car orgnizations also play vital role of car increment on streets. Each year millions of cars manufactured by car companies. Moreover, Car companies provide easy loans and launch several schemes that make easy for people to purchase car.
What government can do to encourage people to use transport apart from cars? Firstly, Government have a power to make laws and regulations. As an illustration, In 2015 government of NEW DELHI introduced new law of even odd car number system to reduce traffic on roads. Secondly, Government develop public transport system of their country and make it reliable and reasonable for public. Moreover, Government increase road tax, sales tax on cars to discourage people to use cars. Government also adopte another approches like reward system, deduction on income tax, free travel, discount on fair etc..
To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that car is asset for peoples but in upcoming years car going to become liability for people, if cars are not use properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
In the modern era, Car industry become billion dollars industry. Since, First car inve...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the cities') or simply say ''Most cities''.
Suggestion: Most of the cities; Most cities
...ets led to huge problem of traffic jam. Most of cities of the world suffer from massive traffi...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...w govenment handle this problem. Now days life become so quick, Everyone want eas...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...rt apart from cars? Firstly, Government have a power to make laws and regulations. A...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...e tax, free travel, discount on fair etc.. To put it in nutshell, I pen down sa...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ar is asset for peoples but in upcoming years car going to become liability for peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358974359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59728528685 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0912542079 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0526315789 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303973203244 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112946961603 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109575748563 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212731192523 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793767412301 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.