Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside .What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Proportion of youth are migrating to settle themselves in cities and towns, after leaving the countryside. As a result a lot of elderly people are left alone in the countryside .In this essay we are going to discuss the problems caused by this issue, and also ways to overcome it.
There are many reasons why young people prefer to live in Cities and Towns compared to spending their lives in the countryside.But the two main reasons are lifestyle and better Education.
Due to such migration, there are problems with development back in the countryside, along with overpopulation of cities. Firstly, the rate of development of countryside will be much slower as compared to the towns and cities. The lack of development will further add to the problems, as the facilities like Hospitals, Schools etc will be understaffed. The places will be hard to fill. For example, Britain's countryside hospitals are facing severe shortage of doctors and other healthcare employees as compared to the hospitals in London, where there is a high rate of competition for getting a job. Secondly, overpopulation of cities and towns leads to high rates of job saturation, along with very high rates of competition. According to a report In Financial Times there was a competition rate of 10.2 for a job in London, which was over threefold for the same job in Swansea.
An answer to this solution would be to develop countryside and to ensure that the people of countryside gets the same facilities as that of any people living in a city or a town. The government should ensure to maintain a uniformity in paychecks to its employees, so that people willing to earn better and have a better lifestyle in cities holds back and stays in the countryside. For instance, the National Health Service in the U.K has ensured that every medical graduate has to serve in a countryside for minimum 3 months, such policies ensures that Hospitals are not understaffed, which will further help to the elderly people back in the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92941176471 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93968197324 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491176470588 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8036548395 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.923076923 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234724727586 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853256790692 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084478866569 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161057090398 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800831048854 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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