Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Rules are very important in today. Parents and teachers always give priority to obey rules. However, we forget the bad consequence of the strict rules letting us lose problem-solving activity from childhood.
Someone says that children obey rules can shape good behaviors, such as respecting others, making polite requests, and showing table manners. Unlike adults, children aren't aware of the outcome of their behaviors and setting rules can help them realise the basic moralities and social norms. They are easily become spoiled brats without rules.
Other people say that they can't tackle problems independently because of the over-control. The strict disciplines cause a custom that children can't decide independently. As a result, they can't deal with problems without others help. Reporting from TV, there are so many "chinese giant babies" and mama's kids in the society. They can't take care of their daily life so that their family go with studying and working even though in adulthood. Relying on others can't let them grow up so that they can't deal with difficult problems in the society by themselves. Lacking the abilities of independent decision, planning and coördinateness, they are unlikely to achieve success in their careers.
In my view, controlling too much leads to children losing their self-awareness. In modern life, breaking the rules of shackles can bring new horizons. The strict disciplines cultivate "perfect babies", who are submissive like a marionette, losing their spirits. They dare not put their ideas into practice, since they are afraid of being punished if they disobey rules.
- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 61
- In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society? 11
- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 56
- In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society? 61
- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 78
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...isciplines cause a custom that children cant decide independently. As a result, they...
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...decide independently. As a result, they cant deal with problems without others help....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44881889764 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88204035577 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2834547917 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203554127407 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670347749096 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525660635283 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11612029127 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148352068078 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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