Does nature or nurture form a person 's personality?
It is always argued whether nature or nurture is the main determinant to form one’s personality. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe nurture plays the key role in the development of individuals.
At the outset, the environment is unintentionally the fundamental foundation which can exert a profound impact on children’s cognitive development. There is no denying that children are highly likely to unconsciously emulate adults’ behaviors and gradually instill in their mind their parents’ thoughts and beliefs even if they are inappropriate. For example, if a child has to regularly suffer from violence from their family members, in all probability, he or she will develop a propensity for violence at a young age. In addition to that, their family situation can also unintentionally mislead them to the wrong path. For instance, their economic hardships making it impossible for them to go to school will give them the chance to associate with bad people and turn to a career of crime.
Apart from that, the way children are deliberately brought up is also regarded as the most crucial factor which shapes their identities. Initially, environment is the cradle which can find and develop children’s talents. Their natural unique traits need to be nurtured and fostered by means of the education at home and schools, which not only help them not lose it but also utilize it to achieve incredible feats. Furthermore, how they are educated can make them get rid of their bad characteristics and amend their weaknesses. Being well-educated, they will be capable of distinguishing good and bad deeds to protect and develop themselves in the most positive way to become a global citizen.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe individuals’ personality is built by how they are raised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34027777778 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36521035322 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8233748903 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.307692308 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079375883604 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333237884085 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567198050002 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07913023073 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656271227131 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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