A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The literacy rate of a country determines the strategy of nation's development. Our posterity forms an integral part of it, nourishing them with right curriculum becomes imperative responsibilty. Allan Boom rightly said- “Education is the movement from darkness to light”.It's only through schools that the basic culture, decorum, respect, defection could be incorporated in children. Moreover, it's ony during this age the mindset of child develops, hence a proper direction should be provided.
The national curriculum includes the nation's history, the struggle freedom fighters had, it's culture, innate beauty and so on. Children are introduced to multifarious languages, festivals, religion, historical arts, states, sports that prevails in their nation. This is paramount as the child should be proud of his/her country, their ascendants, it not only helps in increasing their knowledge but also inculcates a reverence for their motherland.
Contemporarily, there are different boards of education. Let's say in India- we have, CBSE, ICSE, state board, though they have different syllabus, the basic and necessary subjects are included in their portion. The syllabus should need not mandatorily be exactly the same. Foe instance, ICSE students have a higher standard in English as compared to any other boards. this is the reason why students of ICSE compel in competitive exams related to english. It's said that the pedagogy followed by CBSE has efficacy. The way their syllabus is built may differ and this creates a competition between various boards. The state boards make it mandatory to learn their state language, it's good but it may not be effective in long term if the student doesn't continue his career in same state. The other boards have state's language subject either till 5th or 8th grade, so that the child should not face impediments while communicating with other people living in that state.
Manifestly, from the above discussion we can say that the core foundation must be included in all curriculum, but the way through which it is delivered and the standards followed by them may differ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37724550898 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88454991371 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631736526946 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2920756178 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194882619102 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060193985028 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513976911237 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108853371019 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392998470164 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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