Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been argued for quite a long time whether the innovation of computers has played a vital role in the economic and industrial development over the world. In the last century, computers have consistently been at the top of the developments happened among other technologies. In this essay, I will discuss how computers have been playing a crucial role in many sectors such as manufacturing automation, education system, and Medical Sciences.
To begin with manufacturing automation, there are many manual jobs which were previously assigned to humans, are automated using computers. Previously, they were mainly responsible for completing a piece of work physically but now it is doing by computers. Nevertheless, computers are more efficient in comparison to humans while doing that specific job. For example, in many factories, workers used to make clothing products by their hands, but now it is executing by computer software.
Another point which could be made in favor of computers is that it helped students in improving their education system, especially at international universities. They used to travel to attend classroom lectures at college from long distances and had to physically present there. But, now after the invention of computers, students can attend their classes through online webinars on the internet using the computer. To exemplify, most schools and colleges offer distance learning courses which allow students to attend online classes on the computer.
Last but not least, medical services have been improved over the period of time by computers such as laparoscopic treatments, ultrasound system, and booking online doctor's appointment. It has been observed that since the invention of computers, the medical system has been improved a lot with many advanced technologies. In fact, with the help of computers, researchers have found the treatment of many serious diseases such as diabetes, cancer, and tumor. For instance, at many private hospitals, doctors perform laparoscopic surgeries from long distances using a computer.
To sum up, computers have been playing a crucial role in the modernization and development of manufacturing, education system, and the medical sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...al services have been improved over the period of time by computers such as laparoscopic treat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53372434018 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03507869515 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6953335996 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115497593776 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408998342906 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219927905141 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625240530885 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206621875426 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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