Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.
In modern times, the issue of getting a job has become highly controversial. There are those who say that university education gives to opportunity to get a job however, others think that having experience and developing skills is more important to find a job. In this essay, I will examine both sides of argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two main reason why some people believe that getting a good job is depend on the university education. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of this idea because university education supply high qualification. A good illustration of this that someone who completed the university education such as medicine can gain technical knowledge about the human body and threating illnesses. A further point in favor of completing university education to find a job is that education gives to different point of view. If you gave an engineering degree from good university, you can see the problem with different direction and produce quickly solution.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that having experience and developing soft skills gives to priority to people who want to find a good job. The main reason why people think that is a good idea is because it could positively affect some work field. For example, some skills like communication and leadership experience is more important than good education for some job such as sales, marketing and advertisement.
In conclusion, this is, a topic, which is very relevant to modern society. Despite the arguments to contrary, I feel very strongly that completing the university education should be more important especially for younger people. If they gain higher education degree, they will probably easily find a good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13402061856 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84761767827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512027491409 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4112704014 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340751528661 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113742056856 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893427298811 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210842728983 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962742389112 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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