Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by shureoni on Tue, 07/30/2019 - 13:27

There is no doubt that living abroad has become commonplace in the light of globalization. However, a school of thought holds that people when living in a different country often suffer from social and practical trouble. In this essay, I will examine the problems associated with this trend before looking at some of its benefits.
On a societal level, individuals moving to another country are likely to face the language barrier, which has a negative bearing on their lives. Difficulties in using proper language in conversation may create a confusing atmosphere and misunderstanding from people around them. Gradually, they would be reluctant to cultivate social connection or make friends, even become a target for bullying by surrounding local people. Therefore, not being adept at a foreign language is indeed challenging for outlanders to integrate into society.
On a practical level, non-native speakers could run into some problems. Their misuse of a foreign language in tandem with differences with indigenous customs would make the locals occasionally try in vain to understand what they want to convey. As a result, non-native residents tend to lose opportunities in life, especially in their career. Towards those who are dying for promotion prospect, lack of knowledge about a foreign language can become a big obstacle to scale the heights.
In conclusion, it is inextricable that people overseas who are not master in a foreign language be likely to face social and practical troubles. However, this issue can be addressed if they make an effort to learn it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27380952381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98024855613 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7864192079 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193933369593 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621194503709 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346028416816 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11425887559 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025815854426 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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