In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is you opinion.
The importance of children are engaged in different kinds of paid work which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
On the other hand, there are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that some students are gaining the higher education. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that children learn valuable experience in the work place. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that this is very good opportunity. besides, the lack of education for their future career. Hence, it is apparent why many are against in favour of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a logical conclusion that the benefits of children are engaged in different kinds of paid work are indeed to great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...is that this is very good opportunity. besides, the lack of education for their future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06912442396 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67171437854 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576036866359 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1400082736 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288478636938 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958392796691 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920307946754 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164479035025 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514262908769 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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