In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical days reveals that some countries children are various paid work but other think that this nation totally wrong has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People has been intrigued analyze and explain the aforementioned statement. This essay is an attempt to examine the both side of views before arriving at a logical conclusion.
Looking at the brighter side in this nation mostly children paid work is the beneficial for students because they do have lot of work experiences. Another reason this quiver it is the help of financially supported if any case student in difficulties situation they easy tackle with the help of paid job. Yet another benefit that value of the hard earned money and gain the lot of communication skills with the conversation one person to another.
Looking at the gloomy sides, the negative fact cannot be ignored there are many enormous to embark with nation mostly students bait the money do more time work they distract the study and not concentrate the education. Moreover there other cons the paid work over burden for the students.
On closely analyze it can be conclusion that work is the best sources of earn money but it depends on people which idea consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...tudy and not concentrate the education. Moreover there other cons the paid work over bur...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ends on people which idea consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97797356828 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66669415913 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594713656388 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9600857842 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211591838824 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822865869481 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698858706261 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121002805436 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269263418608 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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