Some people believe that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other disagree consider both sides and conclude

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Some people believe that boarding school are an excellent option for children, while other disagree consider both sides and conclude

The importance of the boarding school which was always been debatable has now upsurges a lot of argument in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of laminating celebrates has sparked controversy over the potential of this trend is an integral part of society in the recent year. It can be agreed that the upside of laminating celebrities are instrumental indeed. This easy will be elaborate on both assertions and provide a well weighted conclusion.

There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from fact that makes students independent and self reliant and also further enhances their confidence level .Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that they learn to deal with students with multi- cultural background moreover, they learn discipline, cooperation, and teamwork. Needless to say all this merits are boarding school in a good stead.

However there are some pitfalls that negative this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that. Beside. Hence, it is apparent why many are against boarding schools.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of boarding schools are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential drawback should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... further enhances their confidence level .Another pivotal aspect for this argument...
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...urther enhances their confidence level .Another pivotal aspect for this argument is tha...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
...ultural background moreover, they learn discipline, cooperation, and teamwork. Needless to...
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Suggestion: However,
... are boarding school in a good stead. However there are some pitfalls that negative t...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44748858447 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89404072837 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3675267613 50.4703680194 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896796395875 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384474297928 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280540845363 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550249967464 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00818260153633 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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