Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues. To what extent do yo agree or disagree.
There is a debate among the people related to the wage. Some people think that Offering the same amount of money to everyone boosting the working environment towards politeness and peaceful in a company. In my opinion, I completely disagree that paying an equal salary to each employer cannot make an amicable atmosphere, while it creates more issues in the company.
To begin with, why the worker cannot have the same salary in the corporation. The first point for this, today many students pursuing higher studies, such as master and post graduation program for achieving huge salary package in the future from the company. However, if a company providing the same money to every person, therefore no one eager to study more, also this can lead to a problem for the company. Moreover, an employers salary should be commensurate with their experience. In other words, a person is worked in the company for a long time also his wage is similar to the novice employer, then an experienced worker fell unbearable to continue his job in the company.
Secondly, those who risk their lives every day deserve a higher salary than in assistance who does menial office tasks. In fact, there are various levels available in the job sector like a manager, administrator and all of them have specific skills, but comparing them to normal employer salary then, it is terribly effect to other workers, as a result, employer would lose an inspiration to work hard and give the best of themselves. In addition to that, opportunities for career advancement are necessary for employer satisfaction and retention at a company.
In conclusion, In my view; the employees ought not to have the same salary because this causes great problems in the company as well as reductions in studies and skills which taken place if the wager were the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sector like a manager, administrator and all of them have specific skills, but co...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sfaction and retention at a company. In conclusion, In my view; the employees o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93527508091 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65288881081 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1413461531 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06120827912 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128353850236 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482554747524 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388216792945 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790891806075 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291168118982 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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