Smoking should be banned in all public places. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Now days youngsters doing drugs it also become a part of their life also they think it is a status symbol surly there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals that today smoking has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People always used to analyze and explain that smoking should be banned in the public places. Regarding this topic I will explain in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, smoking is very bad habit that youngster grown in their body it have lots of bad effects. Moreover the people who are taking this type of drugs they are decreasing their life and losing their hope to live long. After that people who are addicted they sale things when they do not have much money to buy these types of drugs. On the other hand some people sell their houses and live in rental house. Moreover they also beat their family members when they did not get drugs. Mostly elder people smoke the much but now day’s teenagers more do smoking then elders.
Furthermore, when teenager’s parents have to know that their child doing this type of things then they go to drug abdication's hospital to take doctor’s advice how they get their child out of the this habit. Moreover when people take their child to hospital doctors do lots of things with that child and be a strict with this type of patients. For example 70% of teenagers in Punjab is losing their life because of drugs.
To end, I think that government should ban this type of things and people if they are addicted they should not smoke in the public place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...Now days youngsters doing drugs it also become a part of their life also they think it...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...t that youngster grown in their body it have lots of bad effects. Moreover the peopl...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...their body it have lots of bad effects. Moreover the people who are taking this type of ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ife and losing their hope to live long. After that people who are addicted they sale ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... their houses and live in rental house. Moreover they also beat their family members whe...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
... advice how they get their child out of the this habit. Moreover when people take their ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... get their child out of the this habit. Moreover when people take their child to hospita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 20.9802955665 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64930555556 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30505087766 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503472222222 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5204035885 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186669460322 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797550898551 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920276116616 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146632591892 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589052138833 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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