Smoking should be banned in all public places. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals smoking should be banned in all public places has been one of the prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. I completely agree to this notion because it is detrimental for individual as well as society and I will discuss points in further paragraphs.
To begin with, smoking is harmful for smoker person health as well as other person. Firstly, masses contain nicotine which causes enormous diseases such as cancer and lung diseases. The majority of people suffering from those kind of fatal diseases because they are smoking addictive person. Moreover, passive smoker can develop cancer of mouth which leads to cause of death. For example, researchers conducted the survey and they had proved that the most of adult are indulging in smoking drug.
In addition to it, it may be great effect on the budget of money in which smoker can create crime because they have no sufficient money for buy drug products. Furthermore, it may adversely affect fetus during pregnancy. So government should take perfect step to eradicate this problem. They should provide awareness program among the young people which aware about negative effect of smoking. Moreover, authorities should impose high price on the addictive person and who one can sell this type of drug.
In conclusion, in my point of view smoking should be banned by taking strict step by higher regime as well as individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06746031746 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58097324715 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7427748043 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2142857143 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20220205891 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620277703671 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065776291171 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129772081211 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550384236477 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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