All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity,
How could it be tackled?
obesity nowadays has become a number one dilemma and life threaten across the world. A plethora of diseases have accompined with it. this serious issue impact adults and childeren productivity and makes them extremely dependent on their families. this essay aims to discuss the reason of obesity and it will also provide some solutions to mitigate it among people.
To begin with, there is no doubt that becoming overwiegh and obese rely on several factors. First of all, the human being life style. For instance, most of the individuals these days are eating invaluable food via some fast food restaurants due to their tight daily schedule, hece, they calim that they have insufficent times to cook their mael by themselves. Yet, these meals might be considerably cheap and afforadble, and served quickly, but unfortuanely it’s lacked of some significant healthy ingreadiants that our body need it. Second of all, low physical activities also is plying a crucial role in gaining high weight. To illustrate, there is a conspicious link between inactivity and obesity, which means that people who are doing a low physical activities such as jogging, walking or cycling are most likly to syffer form getting too much weight in the foressable future.
On the flip side there are some ways might alleviate the dangerous influence of obesity. Firstly, increase the public awarness. To put differently, to talk out loaud through social media paltformes as an example about the dangerous affect of obesity. it’s irrefutable that many people have no adequate data about this disease and how much it costs the governemnt yearly and what are accompined diseases for obesity. The Minster Of Health in saudi arabia for example has recently released a study on obesity. this report has shown the percentage of obese people in saudi arabia. Moreover, it also listed some fatal diseas that accompanied with it such as Hypertension, Diabetus, Insomina and more disease. such these inforamtion was unknown for many people over many years there. Therefore, individuals started to take this issue in their consideration. Secondly, surgical and non-surgical solutions might be effective to overcome such problem. For instance, there are various method indeed participate in lowering people weight. The bariatric surgical procedures is a one of famous exmaple of fighting obesity for ever. obese patients nowadays resort to such surgical solutions as it very effective settelement for their problem.
to sum up, there are lots of reasons that stand behind obesity such as the wrong life style. However, obesity can be cured by some solutions as surgical intervention or by enhance awarness of the serious problem that accompanied with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28211009174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72170598821 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571100917431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3497809148 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.12 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.44 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220321547126 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054740360143 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338035678829 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119882679142 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561649354923 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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