Big shopping malls are coming every day and small shops are shutting down. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this to common man?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
With the uprising of colossal shopping malls, many domestic outlets are closing down leading to birth of vast maladies for the average person. Even though, it is unmistakably also have conducive effects on the society and person.
Monumental supermarkets are all in one destination for a person to buy anything of need. Under a single roof, there are clothing shops, gaming arcades, fitness centers, food stores along with some other entertainments like cinema. All of this is in one enclosed space where there are no such worries of traffic as these come with in-built parking areas. A good example of it is Pavilion Shopping Complex in my hometown which is often full of hustle and bustle – mainly of people who came there to watch movies or for shopping – with people, just enjoying their leisure time. In addition to all of it, money spent on these contribute to economic growth of the country, while, helping to reduce on road traffic.
As regards to adverse affects, the preponderant one which cannot be ignored is the closure of compact outlets which is accounted for some of the development of country. Even though, big shopping complexes may or may not be directly linked with such occurrence, it is often very disparaging as at the end, the one who’s losing out most is the owner of a small shop. To instantiate, most stores nearby by the large hypermarkets often being not able to compete them, ultimately suffers losses and closes down, whereas, other close down of financial crisis as they may not often generate much revenue as customers prefer visit malls more which provide relaxing environment. Another obvious drawback of such huge building as they often sell things at much higher cost than market price which is often disregarded as being a part of an entity with vast diversity of things from all over the world. To illustrate, food outlets like burger, noodles which’s cost is only 20-25 rupees in the local shops, are worth 100-150 rupees in the complexes.
To hammer it all down, stupendous shopping malls are full of goodness and stains, whether known or not known. As a matter of fact, what matters more is the preference of people and if they want to, they can go on a shopping spree in these colossus building or just be delightful in small-scale retail stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... compact outlets which is accounted for some of the development of country. Even though, bi...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this colossus' or 'these colossi', 'these colossuses'?
Suggestion: this colossus; these colossi; these colossuses
... to, they can go on a shopping spree in these colossus building or just be delightful in small...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, while, as regards, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56950843529 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.351896949 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132231417941 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445675777177 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407809132241 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845787223485 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018364702945 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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