In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
These days especially for young adults sporting tournaments just intention for the earn more money. In past many players break world records for his country. In this essay, I would like to talk about this debate what exactly do for a young people who have interested in sports events.
To being with particular I told to INDIA country in past time sports athlete not the importance of sports. that's why we see that in commonwealth and world champions not much as recorded for our country, some of those who have already participated in events but not get a good result. Let's take an example in 1983 Kapil Dev is the man who had won the world cup cricket match won for an INDIA it is a proud moment to us. But that time was not people intend to earn money purpose himself but for a country to break world records. this is for an INDIA but many other countries have similarities could be matched.
Now the trend changed younger people focus on social media and advertising purpose instead of sport champions and those who all are the earn much form there not concentrate on the country. one example to understand in an INDIA cricket
the team now younger players contributed his efforts as much as do but elsewhere more focus diverted to another activity or maximum aim for finance purpose.
To sum up with above my decision is to thanks to our government will urging to future younger people to contribute in sports champions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62992125984 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45193108058 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.309190138 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174943694261 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747292923381 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450683042103 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794730393365 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702338255345 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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