Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
There is no denying the fact that cars have impacted our lives to a great extent. Some people argue that cars have more demerits as compared to its merits. This essay will discuss my agreement to this fact and examine both the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car.
The first advantage of having cars is one can save huge amount of time instead of opting for public transport. As the individual is not time-bound, it helps him to plan journey according to his need. Another advantage of cars is the comfort it provides. It is irrefutable that the cars seats are more comfortable as compared to the other transport options available. Even if we need rest, we can sleep in our cars. According to a recent survey published in The Daily Post, published on 27 March, car sale values have risen by 67% globally, depicting that people prefer buying their own car in order to save time and drive at their own ease.
On the flip side, easy availability of cars has made people lethargic, which indirectly has made them physically unfit. People prefer to cover short distances over car, whereas on the contrary, in older days, they used to walk long distances which helped them remain healthy. This fact was proven by the reports published by National Forensic Lab, in 2019, showcasing the decrease in the health levels due to more usage of cars in daily life. Moreover, car is not the luxury that everyone can afford. People end up paying unbelievable amount of loans just to meet the expense of this commodity. As per the study by Indian Tax committee, 34% people in India have failed to clear their loan and have fallen in debt. Thus, cars have not only made people unfit, but also buried them under debts.
To conclude, I agree that despite the fact that cars have benefits like saving one’s precious time and providing comfort, we cannot ignore its drawbacks such as health issues and the high purchasing cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, such as, on the contrary, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41537615085 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9538195041 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341210811168 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110253020599 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728698812108 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210367480392 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863940290106 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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