The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the comparison between India and China in population
growth since the year 2000 and estimated population until 2050.
Overall, China started with more number of people and estimated to decline
by the last year, on the other hand, India's population gradually proliferated.
Firstly, at the starting of the 21st century, there were 1 billion people in India while
about 1.25 billion in China. A decade later, china's and India's population increased by 0.1 and 0.2 billion respectively. It is estimated that, by the year
2030, both the countries population size coincides at nearly 1.45 billion.
After 2030, a flip is expected between 2 countries. In 2040 china's population
size is expected to decline which is just above 1.4 billion but, India's population is will steadily rise to above 1.5 billion. In the final year, India's population is 1.6 billion and china's is around 0.2 less than India's population.
In conclusion, there is a trend observed in china's population between 2000 and 2050 but, the Indian people were skyrocketed
throughout the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29885057471 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71872491932 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4858943748 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298162056148 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150776884814 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127070512805 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13772701665 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110012236472 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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