As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
I more or less disagree with the fact that As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate .I think so humans have became more lazy and lethargic rather than stupid as now for a small distance also humans prefer vehicles even for petty calculations they use calculators,googling the assignments .
But now as the mobile are growing and developing in every single day a new mobile technology comes for example i can say of mine that in 2015 ending i purchased vivo v3 phone and its so fastly evolving that now in 2019 from v3,v4,v5,v6,v7,v8,v9,v10 ....it has reached to vivo 15 pro .There are many diseases like alzeimers cure by latest technology equipments only.Now we can talk people face to face by the help advanced and scalable technology sitting at distant places for example skype android app in which we can make video call to anybody.Now there are online booking system of theaters are made so that humans don't have to wait in long queques of line for example book my show where we can book a ticket of any movie from our mobile or website.As these high level technologies are proliferating in the market because humans who are the inventors of them they have developed such logical thinking,aptitude,analytical reasoning .
I conclude by saying Technology is not deteriorating the capability of humans As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems which enhances their brains more hence technology had made some what lazy but not stupid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, i think, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97692307692 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30683287144 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 23.0359550562 373% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 303.232584001 60.3974514979 502% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 431.333333333 118.986275619 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.6666666667 23.4991977007 369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 5.21951772744 383% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422319298358 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.344087964511 0.0831039109588 414% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200314591572 0.0758088955206 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344087964511 0.150359130593 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200314591572 0.0667264976115 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.4 14.1392134831 321% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 12.1743820225 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.38706741573 137% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 11.2143820225 325% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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