you went on a trip with your friend while returning you forget your wallet, so write letter to your friend to send it back and guide to send it back.
Dear Monika,
Hope this letter finds you well. I landed safely in India. We spent a wonderful time and this would be the best holiday ever. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for having me at your place and making this trip so special. I am writing to ask you for the wallet I left at your house.
When I reached home, realised that I left my wallet in your house. As to recall, I might have dropped it in your room near to dressing table while packing. I forget to pick it up in a hurry. Luckily my passport was not in it, so I was still able to travel.
Still there are some valuable items in my wallet, I want you to courier it to me as soon as possible. You can send it to my office address as I spend most of my time there.
Once again thanks a lot for such a great time.
Convey my best to your family
Regards
Valli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...n it, so I was still able to travel. Still there are some valuable items in my wal...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02958579882 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98793672956 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4847088079 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.3846153846 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261822670121 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850596627099 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680424106459 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124831843253 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072248925554 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.21 8.71597938144 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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