SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT WE SHOULD LIMIT THE AMOUNT OF VIOLENCE IN MOVIES AND TV PROGRAMMES. HOWEVER, OTHERS BELIEVE THAT VIOLENT CONTENT CAN BRING SOME POSITIVE EFFECTS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
In the modern society, the need of citizens to enjoy action movies and TV programs has increased significantly in the recent years. Some people advocate these categories of movies should be invested more heavily in order to meet the expectation of viewers, while the others blame movies with too much violence for causing several consequences. In my opinion, movies containing violent contents should be encouraged to develop on grounds of the ensuing reasons.
To begin with, violence in movies and TV programs, in reality, does bring some startling advantages on different aspects. By watching these contents on TV or computers, watchers can have their near unremitting pressure at work relieved thanks to the enthralling scenes that have been sophisticatingly designed, thereby ultimately increasing the productivity. Besides, in some countries, documentary movies can inevitably contain violent scenes, but it will truly reflect the impact on the precedents, thus helping us understand the toughness in the fight against the enemies and respect the liberty which we inherit nowadays. Furthermore, with the enormous support towards the wide coverage on TV, the producers of these fierce-scene films can stand a chance of become a household name and have more motivation to create movies with unparalleled qualities to live up to the incessantly growing watchers’ demand.
It would be an exaggeration to claim that watching the films which involve an excessive number of violence scenes does not bring any demerits. The extravagant preoccupation with these types of film of some children may lead to the increase in potential juvenile delinquency. Nevertheless, if children have the sufficient parental supervision, the seriousness of this problems can be reduced obviously. In addition, a lot of people watching too much violent contents are reported to have engaged in quarrels since they merely want to imitate the actions implemented in the movies. However, this phenomenon can be averted by creating more rigorous rules and set watching time limits.
In conclusion, it is evident that the violent contents in films has both benefits and downside. When all of the aforementioned issues are tackled, violent movies will pose no threat to our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46723646724 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03548652712 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4539013667 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244368394914 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816865695404 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465249108169 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144440248303 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433194198317 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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