Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. Discuss it.
Technology has changed the lives of people, and with its footprints in the medical field, it helped increase the life expectancy. Some consider this a positive development while others argue that it creates a financial burden on society. In this essay, necessary evidence will be provided on this topic before reaching a conclusion.
Medical technology has revolutionized the way diseases and patients are treated in today's world. It has enhanced the effectiveness and methodology such as X-rays, MRI and others to treat and diagnose different diseases. It has been reported that life expectancy which was 46.7 in 1990 has increased to 59.3 in the year 2016. Therefore, it is evident that medical technology has a huge impact on our lives as people can live long and happy lives with their loved ones.
In addition, life expectancy increase means less workforce as more people will fall in the old age class and there will be a decrease in the labor workforce category. It will also add cost in terms of routine medical checkups of the aged people and cause a financial burden on the families and ultimately on the countries. Further, it will increase the population and consume more resources and becomes a big problem for small countries with non-renewable resources. So, instead of positive, it also causes negative impacts.
To conclude, although there are some downsides to longer life expectancy which can be dealt with individual and collateral efforts, we should be thankful for the medical technology that we can live longer with our loved ones, and share happy moments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08846153846 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7581267762 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2627610023 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176225666096 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624715160705 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077677597838 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106848433739 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031817703884 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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