You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
My name is Harsimran Singh. I am writing this letter to inform you that yesterday I have seen the advertisement in the newspaper about the trainee course in java which is going to start next week. I think this course will be very helpful for me in my job.
However, the file work which you have given to me is about to complete. I would like to request you if you can arrange any skilled person who can take charge of my work for a few days. Moreover, I am sure that this trainee course will raise my knowledge in java which is also beneficial to your company.
As you know my all work is based on the java and applications. There are some techniques in java which I actually missed when I am doing my graduation and now I do not miss the chance to learn that. From these techniques, I will surely learn how to make applications that can not be hacked. In other words, the coding and decoding techniques are essential to make software applications.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... will be very helpful for me in my job. However, the file work which you have gi...
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Suggestion:
...ich is also beneficial to your company. As you know my all work is based on the ...
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Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harsimran Singh
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Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harsimran Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, moreover, so, i think, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56175374198 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0769797184 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294996850744 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100476380346 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632498115978 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168545143296 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081410846663 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.