While we see some politician enjoying power well into eighties an normal worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, 60,70 in different countries clearly, there is little concession to a proper retirement age until what age do you think people should be encourage to remain paid employment. Give reason for your answer.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals perfect retirement age has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporay discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyse and explain wheather what age of people obliged to retire into thier jobs. I think 65 age of people should be retired and i will discuss reasons in further elaborating paragraphs.
To commence with, there are enormous reasons behind this notion. First and foremost reason is concession to a proper retirement age at 50 or 60 because in this age people do have satisfied about thier jobs and they are not work in energetic way. Moreover, old age person have unsufficient to work in proper way so in which companies has face great loss in thier properties.
In addition to it, higher age of person have not advance techniques for complete companies project as well as other difficult work because thier knowledge is traditional. Furthermore, modren machines are available for finish work but old person can not operate in proper way in which they do not give higher profit for companies.
In conclusion, in my point of view it is the responisibilities of campanies as well as higher authorities should conceive proper age of retirement whereas youngster can achieve job in which unempolyment rate will be decline.50,60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... 65 age of people should be retired and i will discuss reasons in further elabora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01287553648 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90697058764 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4031937203 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311670130447 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126338853402 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965963787994 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185939886354 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733452880907 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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