Some people think that the governments is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
In modern society, spending money for art has become highly controversial. It has been suggested that money that are spent by government for art could be beneficial for other thing like education or hospital care in our world. I partly agree this idea and this essay I will provide some argument to support my opinion.
Generally speaking, there are wide range of reasons why people believe that paying out money in art filed is not effective to our society. Perhaps, the primary argument for supporting this is that spending money to health service are more essential for human life. For example, if government separate much more money to human health care and education than art, people can have good lifestyle and easy access to health service and then generate easily work of art.
However, it must be said that there are several arguments to the contrary the idea that wasting money to the art is important to today’s word. Perhaps the strongest of these is that art is essential way to understand the past and today society. If government spent much money to improve art artists can make good artwork without any concern like earn money.
In conclusion, wasting money to the art by government is a topic which very relevant to modern society. I believe quite strongly that spending money for education and health service is more important than art spent for human life. If governments implements this policy to our life, it will provide some trouble for our next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51099873326 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7892364733 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307550764114 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128171688199 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431119469265 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214836460524 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375317584988 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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