Advertising has become part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is emerged that advertising now plays an intrinsic part in our life. Some people say that it is very beneficial to our daily life. Personally, i completely disagree with this statement.
Widespread advertisements can have negative consequences that are worthy of consideration. Firstly, not any advertisements on social media are always accurate. In fact, nowadays, many companies take advantage of visual effects to exaggerate the quality as well as the appearance of their products. Consequently, there is a large number of consumers who are frivolous completely trusting the information given on these advertisements and then feel disappointed about the reality. Moreover, this can also raise the costs of these products substantially which gives a huge profit to companies.
The second is that advertisements are becoming more and more disruptive. For example, there are too many sign-boards near public places such as schools, bus stations and many more. This is seriously violating the communal privacy and worsens the beauty of many cities. Furthermore, that sign-boards can be seen everywhere is also a way to exploit the children because they will beg their parents until they are allowed to buy these products if they see them.
In conclusion, advertising has a detrimental impact on the quality of our daily life because of many negative consequences it has left for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37442922374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17588361468 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9338282648 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5384615385 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207015087207 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793419172943 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831937081294 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147776832046 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101131203636 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.