In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some cases, children thrive in school so there is no reason to consider any alternatives. In other cases, children have such a bad time at school or for whatever reasons, home education becomes a necessity. In fact, there is an upward trend for parents who want to let their children study at home instead of regular school education. This essay looks at some of the pros and cons of the home education, but from my perspective its drawbacks outweigh the benefits may it bring.
One of the amazing benefits that have to be told is the individual attention and instruction between the parents and their children. May they have more than one child but the attention they give is definitely far more than a teacher with a class of twenty or thirty. With this advantage, the children can easily have a good grasp on the lessons. In addition, if they do not understand anything they can totally ask their parents at any time during day or night. Another benefit is the flexibility on holidays due to the fact that they do not have to follow the schedule all the times and can immediately take a day off whenever they want.
On the other hand, home education still has many disadvantages. Firstly, when children stay home schooled, they cannot make friends or have many chances to interact with those at the same age. As a result, home educated children tend to be less sociable and have more difficulties when trying to fit in any communities. Secondly, home education requires a parent to work full-time as an instructor, a teacher and a friend to their children and also, they must have experience in teaching and educating; therefore, this is not for every family. Finally, it may be complex for further application to universities or colleges.
Overall, it is important to consider the particular situation and the needs of the children to determine the most appropriate method for their education.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81097560976 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73251702939 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533536585366 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.021133875 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254068082478 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932667935204 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665377424504 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154783186077 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957436652486 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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