The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
I think it is unfair generalisation best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things as in engineering colleges those who adopt computer science and information technology have a keen interest in coding goes in 9 to 5 job which never feels boring for them because they have fervor in that subjects so they discuss with other employees and generate different types of algorithm which are may give a optimal solution really very fast.As we our great cricketors which get to know some different batting stance on the pitch itself while playing which could be very useful to act as defensive jn front of opponents dangerous swing bowling.Like different actors after doing practice at their commonplace get to know different ideas from act of other actors.
But their many enterpreneur who got ideas to form a company or startup in their college or cafe .Their many scientist who got ideas while under a tree like newton on his head an apple suddenly falls which give him information about gravitational force,as by different experiments and empirical methods he got know the free fall time of heavy and low weighted body.There are many buisness tycoons who got their unique ideas while walking in a garden or while in brainstorming session with their friends.
So i conclude by saying that its not neccesary that ideas from a passionate interest will come in commonplace things only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, while, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02145922747 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75537817707 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648068669528 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.046327187 60.3974514979 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 390.0 118.986275619 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.6666666667 23.4991977007 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.21951772744 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244027704499 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196909822804 0.0831039109588 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110478198936 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196909822804 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110478198936 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.0 14.1392134831 290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.68 48.8420337079 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.38706741573 131% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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