Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Some people believe that earning enormous money, which is the indispensable segment of life, is the key to be pleasant. Most of the individuals tend to be thrifty, whereas a few become spendthrift, which is again an individual choice of living their life. There are a plethora of reasons that keep a being blissful by having a tremendous amount of money; however, not the only reason to be cheerful.
Possessing a considerable amount of money crucial to accumulate and fulfill one's dream. In other words, one can achieve all the array of wish and desire, which every person would have thought to accomplish, and the only obstacle is the lack of sufficient wealth. Once the required wealth is gained, and so as craving, one can feel the real bliss of there life. A dream car, a dream house and a world tour with a lovely wife, for example, can be obtained with a sufficient amount of money, which will provide gratifications.
However, money is not the only key which will keep you delighted in your entire life; family and friends, are the strand, who transform your earthly life to a heavenly kingdom. Moreover, cultural activities and family function unite people to have the charm of being enjoyed together. In studies, it has been seen that lonely fat cat tend to have less life span than people staying with family. Helping humankind would be another considerable activity which will help to feel zen is. Supporting in terms of donation, providing food, and participating in a social event, for instance, sporadically <span style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 28px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 100; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: left; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;"></span>obtain an individuals' peace of mind.
To sum up, even though money has always been an essential aspect of a person to being joyful, having a lovely family and friends will be a plus. Moreover, engaging with others and helping each other will enlighten different prospectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56940509915 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79252300531 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609065155807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.330188832 49.4020404114 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195882708277 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849401177604 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563984538413 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129735627341 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435737959697 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.